Sunday, March 13, 2011

the first poem

i had an emptiness
you killed it
i had a void
you filled it
i had a pain
you eased it
i had a soul
you seized it
i had a dream
i gained it
i had a world
you reigned it
i had a wish
it came true
i had a need
it was you
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  1. UnknownMarch 13, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    I always liked this, didn't you use this one for the first song we did?

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  2. Mephisto NegativeMarch 13, 2011 at 10:58 PM

    Yeah, I broke this piece into verses & modified another poem for the bridge & chorus. What the hell ever happened to that song?

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